The Interplay of Information Architecture and Fictional Storytelling

As humans, we’ve been telling stories for a very long time. We’ve grown ourselves out of the various phases of human evolution because of the untapped contribution of stories in our lives. In this article, we discuss the interplay of stories and information architecture.

Insights from information architecture

Information architecture is the structure in which we produce information for consumption. It means that I must invest myself in understanding how I, as a content designer, can understand something before I help my readers put it to use. I understand this by using an analogy of online maps, for example. To reach anywhere, you input the destination, choose your mode of transport, and supply other conditions. Your route is your information architecture. Your choice of vehicle is your persona. Each persona has its set of conditions, speed of learning, and a preferred alternative (more than one route, in the case of online maps).

Let us look at what insights we can glean from information architecture and if we can apply those insights in fictional storytelling.

On perspectives

The following words are from a poem I wrote in 2021:
“Just as you have companions, my friend,
I have stories to keep me company.
The cat has only nine lives, remember?
As a writer, I realize, I’ve rather one too many.”
 

Sometimes, I am the user; sometimes, I am the project manager; sometimes, someone from the third party or vendors; I am everyone. I can assume any voice depending on the information I want to convey. I can adopt the indicative, imperative, or subjunctive mood. I can use the third-person perspective, much like Dr Watson’s voice that plays Sherlock Holmes’ mysteries in the reported speech. Or I can refer to the reader by a generic pronoun called “you”. I can sound encouraging through my words, such as “We recommend using this method for configuration”. Sometimes, I can sound cautious and be didactic, “Wear protective glasses when operating this machine”. I can also be someone who tells how the information must be accessed. Or I can be someone who tags the information for translation and use.

Each perspective has its way with words and will appeal to a specific set of readers, accordingly. I will explain things differently if you are an administrator and not a business user. As a technical writer, I can assume any role and adopt any voice to get my point across. We’ve discussed how we can make more believable characters and how we can use world-building to create contextually meaningful messages. The same thing can be applied using information architecture to create categories of contextually driven content.

On feedback

The reason feedback is often called a gift is because it lends you invaluable insights into the seeker’s brain. If a user story helps you step into the seeker’s shoes, feedback lends you an insight into their reactions and responses. Did the feature deliver what the users need? Did the users find what they were looking for? Did the users configure it correctly? Did the users accomplish what they had set out to? Will the users remember where to find the feature and its information again? Numerous such questions help draw invaluable insights. However, gathering feedback can be difficult. Therefore, to implement documentation and gather feedback, some organizations have begun using chatbots. Soon, we might use technologies like chatbots, artificial intelligence (AI), and machine learning (ML) to drive company-specific generative content, to help improve the findability of information. This translates to fewer support tickets and improved results from our cost-to-benefit equations: a better bottom line. All successful fiction authors follow the same or similar breadcrumbs from their readers. They are keen to glean such insights and implement them into their works. And much like fiction authors, we use the user’s footprints to lead us to the right design.

On clarity of thought

Of the many things that mire out my editor’s brain is the absolute thoughtlessness and absence of clarity that sometimes drips through a writer’s work. I infer, “If that’s how they write, that’s how they must think.” But sometimes, it is not the writer’s fault. It is the fault of the premise with which they begin to think. It turns out there is an order in which we must fix such issues. Begin, that is, with defining the customer’s expectations. We often get into this habit of describing our products’ features. But is not useless to tell what the product does? I can vouch that users are not bothered about the features. All they want is the underlying benefit.

In the context of fictional storytelling, this is much like the cliché, “show, don’t tell”. We must begin with the feature, yes, but we must end with the benefit. Perhaps, this is why, in the context of technical writing and information architecture, we focus on the underlying benefits. As a rule of thumb, ensure that your content doesn’t tell what the product does but what the users can do with it.

On techniques

Amongst the few techniques that help me write better are:

* Progressive disclosure: This involves spreading the message such that it unwraps itself over time. It unravels itself before dear readers such that its learning curve remains relatively flat. I prefer to use this structure when I am creating conceptual content. I lead the users to explore the concept before they delve deeper into the content. Consider this as an inverted pyramid where the tip of the pyramid­—which, in this case, is toward the bottom—denotes the most important message. The focus is on comprehension. In fictional storytelling, we use progressive disclosure for world-building and suspense revelation.

* Pyramid approach: This is easily the most used method in technical communication. I reserve it for all referential content and tasks. I share the most important information before I share the remaining content. This means the content is more usable. In fictional storytelling, we use the pyramid approach when describing an important event or narrating anything that involves a lot of action and drama. It helps create gripping content.

On copyediting

Seldom do we come across a better job than one that pays us to find other’s faults. I kind of love and hate it at the same time: On one hand, I speak of it in delight, but on the other, I abhor the idea of finding faults. However, I do like the idea of making things better. Besides, the task of editing makes me a better thinker. As the copyeditor for my team, I cannot afford to be slippery in my approach, thoughts, and words. At the same time, as a content designer, I cannot undermine the benefits of my copyeditor’s vision. The same skilled artistry that (sometimes) irritates my teammates also empowers my users. I cannot fathom not applying it in fictional storytelling, either.

Speaking of which, let us look at the insights that we can glean from fictional storytelling.

Insights from Fictional Storytelling

Fiction is imaginary literature that is written in the form of prose. It can be short stories, full-length novels, and epics that create a series of novels surrounding the life of your fictional characters. Fiction writing and storytelling both are about the art of writing stories. The difference is that writing is an art and storytelling is a skill.

Let us look at what fictional storytelling teaches us about our profession woven around writing, and if we can apply the insights in information architecture.

On characters

I cannot deny the power that our everyday conflicts have lent to our mental decision-making system. Conflicts trigger response, which triggers action; that passive sense of purpose (of resolving the conflict) is reassuring to us. It is even more useful if we can summarise our conflict in a single sentence. From start to finish, we can take our readers on a journey where they move from a mere thought to a compelling urge. We can drive their imagination to wherever our words take them—with them following us compulsively and unconditionally.

I also like to couple a character’s conflicts with their character sketches and motives. In all kinds of writing, those writers who do not characterize motives tend to lose their readers. Only when your characters can passively show why they are the way they are, your readers will understand why the characters feel or do things a certain way. Bear in mind that the readers don’t have to agree with the characters but must only understand them.


In the context of technical writing, personas are often detailed descriptions of who our users are and how they behave in a certain way. We use these personas to create content that matches the users’ requirements. Such writing has a twofold advantage. One, persona-based documentation is findable. Two, it passively empowers the readers by lending them the power to choose whether they agree with the persona. They understand the persona’s perspective and find common threads.

On choices

Writing fiction is difficult. It is a daunting task to find your way through emotions to seek the right description that matches the little bracket of word choices you and your readers are blessed with. To make the readers bleed through their eyes, you must first bleed your way through words.

You must consciously choose to rewrite repeatedly until you get to those core words that move your readers. Brevity in describing emotions is the key to this transaction. A character’s pain, for example, might make us feel that our pain is a lot lesser. In this way, writing is compassion woven into words. But this has a flip side. There is another type of people who find others’ lives as joyously painful and theirs to be painfully joyous. In another way, writing is decisive; it makes you take a stand. It must.

While I agree that there is no place for compassion in technical writing, I see the sense in which it is applied. All troubleshooting information and, sometimes, error messages are written in the same format: what happened, why it happened, and how to fix it.

On observation

We all uniquely understand reality. Each of us has a design, a pattern in which we comprehend this world. The fictionist within me is enamored by the enormous amount of detail that goes into this kind of world-building. I am fascinated by the works of writers like Charles Dickens whose novels are decorated with characters that speak who they are. For such writers, Babu from Mumbai doesn’t sound like John from England.

I want to make my characters believable, otherwise, how might you—my dear readers—will become the invisible observers of the characters’ lives? How will you believe that you are witnessing everything in real-time?

World-building does not apply to technical writing. At least not directly. But we do create documents that contain information built around the insights from world-building. We have different product and installation specifications for on-premises versus Software as a Service (SaaS) products. We have prerequisites for installation and requirements that might help our users in creating and deploying a virtual environment for testing. The more accurately we can describe the details of the environment, the more accurate the user experience is.

Conclusion

The art of information architecture is primarily restricted to setting the design right. What it lacks is often supplied by the insights gleaned from imagination. This is where the faculties of fiction and information architecture meet.

On conflicts and resolutions

To create a brilliant design, you must pare usability down to its simplest form. And, unless you understand the user’s point of view, it is difficult to know what matters to them the most. I am always curious to know what my application’s users think and want. I break those insights down into ‘manageable chunks of workload’. The input of workload contains cues to help me quantify output.

When I say, ‘manageable chunks of workload’, observe this hierarchy: User stories are divided into user scenarios, and user scenarios are divided into use cases. Each use case, therefore, has specific steps to reproduce, assess, improve, implement, and measure—in the same order. Much like with fictional storytelling, each use case, user scenario, or user story has a unique design in which the user comprehends, refers to, searches for, and builds their understanding.

On skilled storytelling

A world of masterful storytelling involves the elements of good content and good intent. It is not just how you do things, but also why you do them that impacts the people around you. Good content is “what and how” (underpinned by information architecture), whereas good intent is “why” (underpinned by fictional storytelling).

People often say that you eat first with your eyes and then your mouth. Likewise, you first listen to a story with your ears and then your heart. If the structure isn’t right, it might never reach your heart. A good design is like a delightful recipe that not only tastes good but also looks mouth-watering.

On wording

The art of writing is in meeting shifting targets. We all learn as uniquely as we explore. Yet, when it comes to reading, we all move in one direction: From the logical start to the logical finish. Yes, we sometimes skip the timeline to introduce or understand topics of interest. However, it all still points in only one direction. This “shifting target” of moving from the figurative Point A to Point B is immensely fulfilling for the human mind. It lends a sense of satisfaction. In one sense, writing is so much like life itself. We all learn life lessons before we glean the benefits. Likewise, while reading, we learn from wise words before the story fructifies.

Such is this mix-and-match of information architecture and fictional storytelling that leads us to invaluable insights into both fictional and functional worlds.

“Hand-writing” and the sweet spot

I’ve often wondered if we’ve lost the charm of living to the added convenience called the digital life that we’ve constructed around us. I say that because in my increasingly busy life as a content designer at a software company, I spend the majority of my time in front of screens. Therefore, sitting down to practice handwriting is a much-needed relief for me.

So, here I pen (drumrolls for the obvious pun!) my thoughts on why I think writing (by hand), the analog experience, is the sweet spot.

The sweet spot between fiction and function

I am yet to hand-write my first fiction. All I know is that I am a compulsive re-writer. I re-write more than I write. So, typing away is easy. Writing by hand can be difficult. But I do not deny the possibility it lends, for I can think at a pace that matches my pen strokes. This lends me that extra second to compose my thoughts in a better way.

While I agree that I cannot always come up with suitable articulations, expressions, metaphors, phrases, or words, I do not want to be too bogged down by the pressure of editing just yet. I do not want to become so busy re-writing and editing that I forget to write. To reach new shores, I must first set sail. All I need is a pen, some paper, and a determination to begin the voyage.

Of the many pages I have proudly inked with quotes from popular authors.
Featured here is Ranga Abhimanyu (ebonite) with Magna Carta titanium nib and inked with Pilot Iroshizuku Shin-Kai.

The sweet spot between being an introvert and an extrovert

All textbook definitions of introvert are incorrect. Yes, by design, I am an introvert; I am principally concerned with my affairs. Yet I like to flaunt how my favorite ink flows through the pen and shades away or sheens as it dries on a paper. I like to show off my earned collection of fountain pens. I like telling people why using a fountain pen is a hobby they too must cultivate. The topic of fountain pens gets me started. I WILLINGLY talk.

Does that sound like “someone who is pushed to oneself” to you? But then why would I talk about fountain pens to those who don’t even know how to hold one properly? “What a wasteful transition, that is,” the ambivert within me opines.

The sweet spot between the analog and digital worlds

For once, it is nice to see the world go schmoozing past while you perch by languidly on your thoughts. It is comforting beyond belief. Calming. Like cracking the neck or stretching your back. One moment, you are in chaos. In another, you are mentally on a different planet. If chaos is where I had lost myself, calmness is where I rediscover myself. Amidst that calmness, I run my fingers along those carefully curated curves. In my hands is that unmatched, machined (or hand-turned) delight that, whenever meets paper, translates my wordless thoughts into tangible volumes of pages. Oh, that crack of the neck. Oh, that pen put to paper.

What conducting interviews taught me about life

By definition, an interview is an interaction. By nature, it is an interrogation, where people question one another to explore mutual interests or growth goals. By application, I found it to be rather exhausting. Fortunately, by design, this all is purely subjective. Be it may, that is how we began searching for potential teammates. In this post, I mostly talk about what I learnt. I also rant about a few noticeable things.

The assessments and the shortlisting

It isn’t the first time I have helped my team in hiring. And, I assume, it wouldn’t be the last, either. But, unlike previously, I have encountered a few things that I had never encountered before.

In the post-COVID world, we send the questions online. And candidates are instructed to submit their answers in a couple of days. The submissions we received were based on two separate sets of written assessments (or question papers). We know that our written assessment isn’t easy. So, we selected those who showed even a little bit of promise. After all, the assessment is only an initial test, and we use it for sieving through to the candidates that might show some potential. I say ‘might’ because, in this case, we still had a lot of unanswered questions.

The interviews

We conducted several interviews over a couple of weeks. Yet, surprisingly, we did not find the candidates we were looking for.

For reference, we have a list of questions that can help create a conversation. On a ‘happy path’, candidates can expect us to crack a conversation with them, where we ask open-ended questions. When we do expect them to be exact, candidates can be specific. And we usher them to those questions appropriately.

The feedback

This one is interesting. A couple of weeks back, when we couldn’t select anyone, we chose to share the information on a (technical writer’s) regional WhatsApp group. After we shared this work opportunity, someone from within the technical writer’s community commented on the post. Here is an excerpt of it, “One feedback – Few of my friends and acquittances applied. Once single exam papers comes. I have see that too. and then one round and then poof… nothing happens. This is the 3rd time I am hearing this in the last one and half year. Has anyone from this group successfully got into from AHM (sic)? Am really curious. If no, then is playing pranks. or AHM TW are not up their standards, which i doubt. If anyone has got selected from AHM, please put here. I might be wrong in my notion.” (Please note that AHM, here, is an acronym for Ahmedabad, the location for which we were recruiting.)

Later, toward the end of the week, we received an email from one of the candidates whom we had interviewed. He had written, “I understood from today’s interview that I can’t be a potential candidate for further processes, as I haven’t don’t have relevant experience in developing technical write-ups (documentation). No problems with the decision, I respect that. However, wouldn’t it have been a better decision if this was considered before I was asked to develop content and attend a technical round? My whole purpose behind writing this email is to bring to your notice that there are some candidates like me, who do preparations before attending an interview — and the preparations take time. So my earnest request is that before you start screening a candidate, the top management should have a look at the resume before proceeding with any assessment process.”

The ranting

We took the feedback with due respect and diligence, and we will refine our hiring processes.

None of the writers had the skills we were looking for. Simple. The reverse of it, however, is equally true. Our attitude is subject to the side of the interview table we occupy. As recruiters, we take a few things for granted. But, sadly, as candidates, we assume a lot of things. The question is not if one side is more important than the other or who is right and more ‘just’ than the other. The question is whether we are ready to accommodate the other side in our own story.

If, for example, we email all those candidates whom we might have rejected in written assessments, will that not create an unwanted additional liability? Will the candidate, who raised this request, be able to justify the cost (in terms of time, effort, and money)? I agree that it makes sense to inform at least those whom we might have interviewed irrespective of their selection. I have been on the other side and it hurts when you do not receive any communication (good or bad, favourable or not). This questioning has no end. Would you not ask them why they rejected you if and when they tell?

In reply to the comments and questions, I have a few questions of my own:

  • Is the question paper (the written assessment, that is) the only round in the selection process? Even if it was, would we (as either candidates or assessors) be able to highlight all the mistakes, oversights, and shortcomings based on the written assessment itself? If only the resume or written assessment could guarantee success, we all would have hired robots for writing.
  • If we don’t select anyone based on the written assessments, people come back to us saying something similar to, “this is the 3rd time I am hearing this in the last one and half year”. If we consider them for the interview and then don’t find them fit for the role, the candidates might say, “wouldn’t it have been a better decision if this was considered before I was asked to develop content and attend a technical round?” These are two contradictory opinions. Is it wrong to give everyone a fair chance that is based entirely on their performance?
  • Did the preparation for the technical round not teach you anything? Candidates prepare for interviews, I agree. They must. They invest a lot of time and effort, I understand. How is the learning subject to the selection, then? Irrespective of the result of the selection process, did you not learn? If you have, the rejection email (or its absence) mustn’t bother you. If you haven’t, it is good that you didn’t make it.
  • If you get a better offer from another company, would you bother to give us a call or send us an email stating that you are rejecting our offer (and why)? I have seen cases when people didn’t turn up on the day of their joining. Only after they were given a call did they confirm that they joined elsewhere. Besides, what is the guarantee that you will not use an offer to bargain for another one? In such a case, do you inform the companies?
  • If all companies share their feedback on why they rejected you, what would that do to your confidence? Would you take all the feedback positively? What is the assurance that you wouldn’t bad-mouth the company or its selection process?
  • In most cases, people can learn from introspection. But did that happen here?

That’s enough ranting.

The takeaway

To begin with, the episode has taught me an invaluable lesson: hiring is tiring. The interview process seems similar to searching for alliances for an arranged marriage. Everything from behaviour to qualification to skills is taken into consideration.

Life is a race, and I don’t deny that you must run. And run fast. You must project yourself as a sprinter and a marathoner. What surprises me is that some of us don’t see the obvious. We are just too busy running after the outcome to even pay attention to the joy of running itself. Why can’t we enjoy the view as we run past our milestones of growth? This episode has taught me to not overrate success by equating it with heavier brand names, higher salaries, or longer titles. It has also taught me to not underrate or ignore my countless little successes. Each release, every new tool, and all the work items I closed in a sprint were extremely joyful moments. Every time I pumped my fist, a moment got added to my bucket of memories. I’ll say, stop running. Or, at least, learn to slow down every once in a while.

You didn’t plan to be ‘here’: you didn’t plan to be born as a technical communicator—a good majority of you, that is. You did not plan to be an employee of a certain company. You simply hope to do so. And that’s all the difference there can be. People, places, companies, designations, and salaries don’t define your success. They cannot. Life is not an outcome of only accomplishments. Life is a grand total of experiences. You don’t define your life by when you die, but by how wholesome you’re finding it to be. The episode has taught me to not bother about the destination when I can enjoy the journey.

Each company has its template for candidates. Selection or not, it still is an experience. Let us learn to acknowledge that difference. The episode has also taught me to be a bit more considerate. I purposely wish to create some room for someone else’s micro-story within my own success story. I have also realised that my success cannot define my path. But my path will define my success. And, while that’s how I choose to forge ahead, I am still looking for teammates.

Twenty Words Tuesday: Week 40 Prompt

Thank you, Bulbul’s Bubble, for this week’s writing prompt.

So, here’s my entry for #TwentyWordsTuesday, a 20-words-story-prompt. which for this week is Wall.


Wall

It took him years to build the ladder to climb and look beyond what lay behind her mental wall. Nevertheless.


If you, too, would like to participate, just:

  • Write a story in exactly 20 words, excluding the title. The story must highlight the prompt of the week.
  • Tag her post
  • Leave a link to your attempt in the Comments section in her post.

I hope that you like my humble attempt.

Twenty Words Tuesday: Week 38 Prompt

Thank you, Bulbul’s Bubble, for this week’s writing prompt.

So, here’s my entry for #TwentyWordsTuesday, a 20-words-story-prompt. which for this week is Wish.


Wish

There she was. All alone. And then she looked up in the sky and regretted, “what if we’d left together!”


If you, too, would like to participate, just:

  • Write a story in exactly 20 words, excluding the title. The story must highlight the prompt of the week.
  • Tag her post
  • Leave a link to your attempt in the Comments section in her post.

I hope that you like my humble attempt.

The Art of Living: Online Happiness Program

It has been more a couple of months that I enrolled for and completed a four-day online happiness program. Through the program, I got introduced to the Sudarshan Kriya and a host of other Yogasana techniques and postures. In this short review, I share my experience.

The Course and the Contents

Given the COVID-19 situation, and the lockdown, our group was initiated into the Kriya via the Internet. And, while the process was straightforward, there were guidelines that we had to comply with throughout those four days.

We all have heard at least once that we are what we eat. If that is true, we need to be extra careful with what we consider as ‘food.’ Anything that we intake then must be of a value precious enough for our consumption. Whether it is food (for the stomach) or food (for thoughts). The first step, the initiation that is, is a carefully crafted exercise of introducing yourself to a new source of power and learning. And, for the reasons I just enlisted, it is always advisable that you do it over a clean bowel, with a fresh mind, and a clear air passage from your nose through your lungs.

The course began with a customary introduction of the participants and the trainers where the trainers, specifically, ran us briefly through their experience, learning, and benefits of the Kriya. Then, we warmed up to the Kriya by practicing Yoga postures, the Sun salutation (or Surya Namaskar), and other breathing techniques (Bhastrika Pranayama and Naadi-shodhan Pranayama, in particular). That is when we were initiated into the Sudarshan Kriya.

The Experience of Sudarshan Kriya

The Sudarshan Kriya is a set of three powerful rhythm and time-based breathing cycles technique with variable intensities (Slow-Faster-Fastest). It helps push the capacity of our lungs to absorb more oxygen. And because most of us don’t use our lungs to their maximum capacity, we were told to rest ourselves against the support of walls. The technique is so powerful that a few of us even felt dizzying or nauseated toward the end of it. But, that is why it is always advisable to only get initiated formally with the help of a guru.

It helped that I had been regularly practicing Naadi-shodhan for the past ten years. Just that because I had trained my lungs into practicing fuller breathing, my experience was a bit mellowed down than others. I didn’t feel the instant magic. But the overall experience of doing it with a host of others like me, even though it was online, was still encouraging enough. That feeling of becoming a student: I had felt that for a long time.

There are a few dos and don’ts associated with the technique. And because I am writing my review on the online happing program, I feel it a duty more than an option to state them:

  • Do it every day; be consistent with your timing if possible.
  • Do not perform the Kriya more than once (Slow-Faster-Fastest is one cycle; you must perform 3 cycles in one sitting) every 24 hours. If you wish to get initiated, do not search for YouTube videos. Seek a guru and ask to be formally initiated.
  • Once you are initiated, do not try to initiate others into the practice. There are levels of this practice that you must pass before you can become a trainer yourself.
  • Perform the Kriya on an empty stomach.
  • Sukhasana, or the usual posture of folded legs, is more than sufficient for you to experience the technique.

The trainers were well-versed with the course contents, and the format and they constantly helped and guided us with how to accomplish our purpose. The question-answer sessions addressed our questions and cleared our doubts.

The Impact & My Observations

I’ve never missed my practice since the initiation. And over time, even though it is just two months, the improvement is worth noting. I am:

  • Assertive and confident
  • I feel less drained out by the end of the day
  • I feel more sure about what I do; the self-doubt is still there but with an unexplainable sense of assurance
  • More relaxed
  • My course-mates, at least those whom I have spoken to since, have had similar experiences. Some of them told me that they even reported an increase in their productivity. Even I’d agree to it to an extent.

Conclusion

The teachings are restricted to the premise of an online workshop, and so the Kriya length (time and scale) takes about 40 minutes to complete, including the Pranayamas. The timing and scale will vary for those who got initiated in person and are practicing since. My friend who introduced me to the technique, Deepak Patil, has experienced Advanced level breathing techniques. He is a daily-practicing follower of Sri Sri Ravi Shankar for the past eight years. His is an elaborate practicing regime that takes about an hour for him every day.

These are testing times for all of us, and if only breathing in a certain way can help us better ourselves, then it definitely the technique is worth a try. For me, it is an experience that has increased the pace of my spiritual growth. I am a better person. And I’ve begun valuing myself even more since the initiation. All that, without losing the degree of compassion I hold for others. That is my biggest takeaway.

If you, too, wish to enroll, I can happily usher you to the right person.

Twenty Words Tuesday: Week 35 Prompt

Thank you, Bulbul’s Bubble, for this week’s writing prompt.

So, here’s my entry for #TwentyWordsTuesday, a 20-words-story-prompt. which for this week is Banner.


Banner

He read every word she skipped—her eyes, as if, held a banner. Respect begot respect. And love poured unconditionally.


If you, too, would like to participate, just:

  • Write a story in exactly 20 words, excluding the title. The story must highlight the prompt of the week.
  • Tag her post
  • Leave a link to your attempt in the Comments section in her post.

I hope that you like my humble attempt.

Inner Voice

I said, “I listen to you every time 
Yet you sound anew on each occasion.”
“Someday, I’d sit back and listen to you,” it said.
Or, perhaps, it was my assumption.

Ever since I’ve yearned for
That participating audience.
With whom I can discuss
All problems and their solutions.

The wait, how I wish, to soon be over.
The wait, which has been rather long and clever.
I can hardly wait. Actually, no longer.
Here I am to you, my muse; in full submission.

Be my thoughts, words, and voice.
Lend me the pleasure.
Here I am to speak and to listen.
Give me thy affirmation.

©Suyog Ketkar
Composed in March, 2021

Writing and Everything Else

The theory that the fictional characters draw parallels with life events is as much true as the thought that the writing impacts and inspires us. And I say this because, on umpteen occasions, I’ve gulped down the bitterness and dryness of words before they began to moisten my mouth and eyes with their truest selves. Yet, in the list of everything that ever has quenched my thirst and kept me alive as I have crawled through my deserted nothingness, writing is at the top. My writing has drawn a lot of inspiration from my life and experiences, and in return has equally blessed me with awe.

Good writing, I have always believed and found to be true, is the next step of despair. And yet, with each passing year, I see more and more aspiring writers stopping at despair. They, somehow, don’t have the energy to follow their dreams, if they have had any. In my case, the only thing that has stood by me ever since my introverted self has begun to surface more often, it is writing. All I do is return its favor. Writing, thus, is both a cause and a consequence for me. People keep asking me random questions. I answer those random questions with nonrandom answers.

Someone asked me the other day, for instance, “what makes you write?” I replied, “the same thing that makes you breathe, go to bed, wake up again the next morning, and go to (or sit down to) work.” I said, “We all are machines running on some fuel. Writing is my fuel. You have your own version of it.”

“But how do you do that,” someone else had asked. I said that writing was akin to sitting by the lake and watching the ripples as you throw stones in the lake. What you get as you unsettle the lake bed and its cozy arrangement of quietude is the ripples that bring up what lays buried underneath. Those are some precious thoughts. I only take a closer look at those, while most fail to acknowledge their presence. This process of acknowledging, churning, observing, and translating those ripples of thoughts into words is both encouraging and enchanting. Writing is quite like learning to live. The most important thing is to take the first step. The second most important is to follow along with your senses, for they are never wrong.

The part of my answer that I skipped deliberately was that they didn’t continue to follow along. A lot of aspiring—and sometimes inspiring—individuals do not remain loyal to writing. I attribute most of my writing to the allegiance I have shown toward this experience. Even before people had begun formally introducing me as a writer, I had taken the pains of going through the labor of birthing ideas. This umbilical connection that I have with some of the posts I wrote more than a decade ago makes me a possessive parent. My sweat-soaked pillows are a testimony of how and when the right ideas were born. I’ve taken the trouble of noting it down, sometimes in my sleep.

“But I don’t have the time and the skills.” Well, I don’t doubt that you have a packed schedule and that writing requires quietude. But when you can’t let your mind astray, is that not the best time for you to focus on moments within the moments of your life? Then how can you deceive your mind to pay attention to only quantifiable, tangible activities, while you must focus on enjoying this transformation? It’s as much a matter of choice: you choose results, I adhere to the process. Yet it comes down to what efforts you put in to make it an effortless read. The beauty, cleverness, logic, or wits are only the devices with which you decorate your writing. The tricks are easy to know about but difficult to put into practice. So, what you as a novice might find hard to install might come to my stolid soul with spontaneity.

It all comes to two things: compassion and emotions. For the human within you to leap over that stile and walk the then lush green lands in soothing gleams of rays, you must have compassion. You have to live life before living it. You have to live life without ever living it. Only then you embark on this journey.

Twenty Words Tuesday: Week 29 Post (Prompt: Bride)

Thank you, Bulbul’s Bubble, for this week’s writing prompt.

So, here’s my entry for #TwentyWordsTuesday, a 20-words-story-prompt. which for this week is Bride.


Bride

His ballads adore her lips,
His thoughts occupied her mind.
Without being his bride,
Meera was one with the divine.


Sunday, that is yesterday, was the World Poetry Day. So to celebrate one, I tried conveying my thoughts via a poetry instead of a 20-words sentence. I hope that you like my humble attempt.